Revisions to Winter Dream

This might not be of interest to anyone, but I do intend to conduct some of my editing process online, as it were. Changes that I have made to a story subsequent to posting it will be noted in an update.

Hence, already -- there are changes to yesterday's story. A line of dialogue has been altered. The dark woman now says:
"You are safe now. That is all that matters to you." (added)

And another thing. It should be called "Winter Dream" (singular), not only because there is one dream, but because "Winter Dreams" is the title of a story by F. Scott Fitzgerald.